More like the Scary Singing Inspector

Hi, I’m Jesse

I’m here to tell you of one of the worst days at school. Do you know why? I’ll tell you why. One of the Inspectors came to school today and his name is Mr Raymond. He said he wanted everyone in the big hall for singing. This particular inspector wore big knickerbockers and tight stockings with shiny shoes. He had big blueberry eyes with a red, round face. A green hat and a brown jacket. He was the meanest inspector I had ever seen and he was very rude. First, he called Benny and Charles up. Poor boys, they didn’t know a single song! Definitely not Blue bells of Scotland or minstrel boy. Mr R loudly screamed,”Do you know a single song?!” “ We know Pretty Polly” said Charles and then Mr R said” THEN SING IT”. He was a very noisy man as well. Benny sang a high squeaky voice because he was very scared and Charles sang in an low voice and it was terrible. Next he called me, I sang a beautiful song on the modelater then it was Gladys Armstrong and Iris Vaughan. They didn’t say or sing a word. Mr Raymond yelled at them” here we have the deaf and dumb.” That was the rudest thing he said that day last week and since then, iris never came back to sing class because of him and I bet you, she’s with the big boys and Benny and Charles doing exams and learning sums.

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  1. Hello, Madison

    That was a very good and well written story about Iris Vaughan and the singing inspectors visit . I enjoyed reading it, it was full of imagination. I liked how you were Jesse instead Iris Vaughan like normal girls or boys are . I found that you were very specific about his appearance . My favorite was how creative you were with your heading. I really enjoyed reading your blog Madison. Well done

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  2. Hello Madison I love the story. Its so detailed every little thing.The story started strong and ended strong. Keep the great work up.

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